Ciaccona

Jul. 10th, 2013 02:41 pm
capt_facepalm: (Snidely)
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Title:  Ciaccona
Author: [info]capt_facepalm
Rating: PG
Fandom: Sherlock Holmes (Gaslight)
Characters: Dr John H. Watson, Mr Sherlock Holmes (mentioned)
Summary: Music appreciation
Warnings: (cliché, schmoop, ack!)
Word Count: 100
Author's Notes: July 10th prompt: (J.S. Bach, Partita for solo violin No. 2 in D minor, BWV 1004)

Dr John Watson wistfully resigned himself to the certainty that he was not an artistic man. If he lived a hundred years, even with the greatest aspirations, he would never produce anything as exquisite as the music flowing so casually from his fellow lodger’s violin. Yes, Watson wrote well enough, but he considered his work to be journeyman-like at best. And yet he was not jealous. The moon cannot view the sun with envy when its own light depends on borrowed brilliance. For if the sun were to quit the celestial sphere, what luminosity would there be left to reflect?

.oOOo.

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Date: 2013-07-14 11:11 am (UTC)

Date: 2013-07-10 07:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com
Aww, Watson, you don't think highly enough of yourself!

Date: 2013-07-14 11:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
It's okay. Holmes will remind him of his own worthy talents from time to time.

Date: 2013-07-10 07:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sabrinaphynn.livejournal.com
aww. Very nice. Very Watson.

Date: 2013-07-14 11:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
Thanks! I'm glad you think so!

Date: 2013-07-10 07:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-aleator.livejournal.com
I love your warning, and yet it isn't trite at all. Absolutely wonderful.

Date: 2013-07-14 11:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
Thanks you for your kind words!
Usually, when I strain to write something more serious, the cracky squirrel who lives in my brain rebels. This time it leaked into the warning.

Date: 2013-07-10 08:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] litlover12.livejournal.com
Beautifully done!

Date: 2013-07-14 11:16 am (UTC)

Date: 2013-07-10 09:10 pm (UTC)
monkeybard: (roseinwinter)
From: [personal profile] monkeybard
Very nicely done!

Date: 2013-07-14 11:16 am (UTC)

Date: 2013-07-10 09:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bwblack.livejournal.com
Dr John Watson wistfully resigned himself to the certainty that he was not an artistic man

I've resigned myself to that on more than one occasion while looking at art and listening to music. Because of that I so appreciate Watson's outlook on the situation. Beautiful.

Date: 2013-07-14 11:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
Thank you!
I did not have to travel far in my mind to find the inspiration for these thoughts. Luckily, Watson does not spend time bemoaning his limits, nor does he begrudge his friend his abilities. Watson is wise enough to realise that it is better to delight in Holmes' talents, because he would otherwise be bereft without him.

Date: 2013-07-10 11:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] arwen-kenobi.livejournal.com
Well done, though I really want to talk poor Watson out of his sadness!

Date: 2013-07-14 11:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
Thanks!
And don't worry about Watson. He is more wistful than sad.

Date: 2013-07-11 12:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] goldvermilion87.livejournal.com
I like the last metaphor!

Date: 2013-07-14 10:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
I never met a metaphor I did not like!
(I also have a strange fondness for the proper use of the double negative.)
:)

Date: 2013-07-11 03:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pompey01.livejournal.com
The moon, like Watson, may not itself be luminous, but it's a darn fine thing on its own merits! :)

Date: 2013-07-14 10:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
Yes, the moon has its own merits, and sometimes it even eclipses the sun!

Date: 2013-07-11 05:10 am (UTC)
methylviolet10b: a variety of different pocketwatches (Default)
From: [personal profile] methylviolet10b
How typical of Watson's modesty. Nice!

Date: 2013-07-14 11:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
Thanks! Humility, thy name is Watson.

Date: 2013-07-13 08:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maestress83.livejournal.com
The conductor of light shouldn't sell himself so short!

Date: 2013-07-14 11:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
The conductor of light is realistic and modest about his limits. He must have had a hard day and has returned to Baker Street in an introspective mood.

Date: 2013-07-14 11:48 pm (UTC)
med_cat: (cat and books)
From: [personal profile] med_cat
There is that...and there is the fact that perhaps the simile is not quite apt, after all--each star shines differently yet they are all beautiful...and a lily of the valley can be lovelier than the rose, in its own understated way...;)

Date: 2013-07-16 06:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
And on rare and special occasions, the moon eclipses the sun!

Date: 2013-07-16 07:08 pm (UTC)
med_cat: (Default)
From: [personal profile] med_cat
Indeed :) And there are certain things moonlight is better for than sunlight...
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