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Author: [info]capt_facepalm
Rating:
PG
Fandom:  Sherlock Holmes (Gaslight)
Characters:
  Dr John H. Watson, Sherlock Holmes
Summary:
  A long-overdue writing assignment
Warnings:
  (none)
Word Count: 100
Author's Notes:
  July 5th writing prompt

July 1881
Baker Street


‘You’ve been to war, Doctor. In comparison, finishing your personal account should be an easy task.’

Battle diaries were compulsory from serving officers.  Watson’s memoir was long overdue and his reticence now jeopardised his pension.

‘Tell them what they want to hear,’ Holmes urged. ‘It’s not worth the pain it’s causing you.’

Watson, appalled at the suggestion, redoubled his efforts. The writing desk lamp burned night after night; his endeavours disturbing the ghosts he thought put to rest.

The right words would not come. Crumpled foolscap surrounded him like so many casualties.

Sometimes, the pen was heavier than the sword.

.oOOo.

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Date: 2011-07-05 01:41 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-07-05 08:37 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-07-05 02:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com
oh wow, excellent use of the prompt. Very well done!

Date: 2011-07-06 02:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
Thank you very much!

Date: 2011-07-05 03:30 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] methylviolet10b
Oh, ouch. Great use of the prompt!

Date: 2011-07-06 02:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
Thank you very much!

Date: 2011-07-05 08:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dork-nerd.livejournal.com
The right words would not come. Crumpled foolscap surrounded him like so many casualties.
What powerful imagery! You are amazing!

Date: 2011-07-06 02:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!
(Amazing? Me? No, but sometimes I get lucky!)

Date: 2011-07-05 09:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] labourslamp.livejournal.com
[livejournal.com profile] goldvermilion87 was bouncing this prompt around with me last night, and I thought it was quite a poser. Your take on it, though, has that quality that all fiction aspires to have and little fiction obtains: comfortably obvious after you've read it, but obscured in impenetrable mists until you do.

Date: 2011-07-06 02:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
What a lovely thing to say! Thank you so much! The prompt had me stumped too for a while.

Date: 2011-07-06 03:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] quillwrecker.livejournal.com
Ohhh, how poignant. Those last two sentances really bring it home!

Date: 2011-07-06 02:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
Thank you very much! I really had no idea how I was going to tackle the prompt at first.
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