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Author: [info]capt_facepalm
Rating:
PG
Fandom:  Sherlock Holmes (Gaslight)
Characters:
  Dr John H. Watson, MD, late of the Army Medical Department
Summary:
  Acquainted with the night
Warnings:  (cliché, and terrified author's first attempt at a new format)
Word Count: 100
Author's Notes:
  July 21th writing prompt  (Thanks,[info]med_cat, for the beta!)

Early Hours

I cannot lie in my cold bed
With nightmares swirling in my head

Instead I put my clothing on
And walk towards a distant dawn

Sightless windows watch me pass
Beneath the light from shuddering gas

Down here the shadows cast are real
To sight, to sound, to smell, and feel
Facing such dangers I have steel

Should they attack I shall not resist
To fight them off with cane and fist

But only shadows they may be
And not an actual threat to me

When sleep brings naught but ghastly fright
'Tis better to walk the streets at night

.oOOo.

Please don't throw vegetables
 

Reluctantly relinquishing the radish...

Date: 2011-07-21 01:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sabrinaphynn.livejournal.com
No, silly, I likes it!
But, dear Watson, you do know that is a bad idea, don't you? At least bring your pistol!

Date: 2011-07-21 09:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
Thanks! You are very kind!
Watson may have his revolver, but then again, perhaps he is willing to fight something or someone. As long as they are tangible, he knows how to fight it.

Date: 2011-07-21 01:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
Ah, Watson! Maybe you should take a friend along!

Date: 2011-07-21 01:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
Maybe, one is already following!

Date: 2011-07-21 02:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com
OOh, poetry, I like it!

Date: 2011-07-22 12:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
Thanks! It was my first (non-cracky) attempt at verse.
Thank you for not running away, screaming!

Date: 2011-07-22 01:02 am (UTC)
med_cat: (woman reading)
From: [personal profile] med_cat
But you are too modest, _mon capitaine_! ;) I think this is remarkably good, esp. for the first attempt!

And you are most welcome for the beta.

Date: 2011-07-22 04:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
You are very kind!
Thank you!

Date: 2011-07-22 03:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] goldvermilion87.livejournal.com
I really like the last line. :-)

Date: 2011-07-22 04:55 am (UTC)

Date: 2011-07-22 05:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scotlandyarder.livejournal.com
Very nice! Verse suits your subject well. Nicely done!

Date: 2011-07-22 05:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
Thank you for your kind words!
This was a first for me.
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