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Author:  [info]capt_facepalm
Artist: [info]quillwrecker (original art is here)
Rating:
PG-13
Characters: Sherlock Holmes, Doctor John H. Watson, Inspector Lestrade
Summary:  Holmes solves a mystery; Lestrade picks up the pieces; Watson tags along
Warnings:  A child is hurt; some scary, whumpy bits; no slash
Word Count:  1990
Author's Notes:   

This is a collaboration spawned by the 500 Members Party at [info]watsons_woesA call for art prompts resulted in a wonderful illustration, which in turn, demanded a fuller story.

Contributors: 

.oOOo.

After six days of chasing down barely tangible leads, Sherlock Holmes had solved the mystery of who had arranged the abduction of six-year old Percival Allenbey-Read.

“His own father?” exclaimed Doctor Watson. “Surely not!”

“Regrettably, it is true. Although he is quite the miser towards his daughter and son-in-law, Lord Allenbey is willing to pay any ransom to get his grandson back safe and sound. I have proof enough against Mr. Crawford Read for hiring the kidnappers.”

“What kind of man, nay, what kind of father, could allow his own son to be used thus?”

Holmes gave a thin, indulgent smile.

“A desperate one, my friend,” the detective replied, and paused, regarding his flatmate. “Poor Watson! You honestly have no concept of real greed. I’m afraid you will never be a rich man.”

“I should rather be destitute and low, than be wealthy by such means!” Watson declared.

“Of that, my friend, I have no doubt! I’m off to see Lord Allenbey. Once Read's involvement is revealed, this whole matter will resolve itself. The family will do anything to avoid public scandal and will likely refuse to press criminal charges. Lestrade will be by to pick up this dossier; it contains my notes for him on the case. It was a sordid affair; one which I’m glad you were kept well out of.”

.oOOo.

With little else to occupy his time, Watson spent the rest of the morning studying the case file and brooding over the unsettling particulars. Of the many facts in the case, one horrific detail bothered him above all the others: the little boy’s ear had been severed as extra incentive to pay the ransom. That the boy's father orchestrated the whole situation, and allowed such harm to come to his own child, was not something the good doctor could reconcile. Even though he had seen enough of it in his brief years, Watson still shuddered in contemplation of the depths of cruelty in the world. Holmes was right to keep him away from this whole business.

Inspector Lestrade arrived before noon and sat down to join the doctor in a light luncheon of Mrs Hudson’s sandwiches. As they discussed the case, Watson could not censor his distress.

“It is a sad truth in this world, John: not all men deserve to be fathers, and not all fathers love their children as well as they ought to,” sighed Lestrade.

As he rose to leave, the inspector observed the disheartened mood that Watson had fallen into, and on a whim, invited him to come along. With Holmes dealing with Lord Allenbey and the Reads, the child’s safe return was assured. All that remained was rounding up the gang of kidnappers. If knocking such louts about the head was cathartic therapy for policemen, Lestrade reasoned, it would be good for Watson as well. The doctor accepted gladly, not relishing the alternative of remaining alone in the flat with the melancholia that had descended upon him.

Several hours of interviewing witnesses and tracing receipts finally resulted in one single address; an abandoned building, which in better days, functioned as a small millinery.

When Lestrade and Watson arrived, they were surprised to find a small crowd gathering, four constables already at the scene, and at least two reporters from the press. There was oily, black smoke issuing from the second storey windows. It seemed that even small fires were newsworthy in London these days. None, except Lestrade and Watson, knew of the connection to the Allenbey-Read case. Presuming this was the correct address, the kidnappers had set the building ablaze, probably to destroy evidence of their identities and their crime.

“Did you hear that?” asked Lestrade, “Someone is still inside.”

“Yes! It sounded like a child, unless I’m imagining it,” replied Watson, his eyes widening with sudden realisation.

“No, John, I heard it too… it was a child; scared, or perhaps hurt! I’d know that sound anywhere!” cried Lestrade as he lunged for the door.

Watson caught him, holding him back and indicating the water trough. The doctor stripped off his coat and submerged it in the murky water, then threw it back on without stopping to wring it out. Lestrade followed suit and then, with soaked handkerchiefs over their faces, the two men entered the smoke-filled building. 

The inspector bellowed for the child and Watson strained his hearing listening for a response. The fire had given the structure a voice of its own and it protested volubly in rumbles and groans. The smoke was too dense to see anything and Watson struggled to breathe even through the dubious protection of his handkerchief. After a few minutes, Lestrade could no longer draw air to call out; gasping, he fell to the floor. Watson fumbled around and found the inspector by his coat, hauled him back to his feet, and dragged him towards what he hoped was the door.

Fortunately, it was, but just before he reached it, Watson distinctly heard the cry of a child. It was coming from upstairs. He flung Lestrade through the door, propelling the inspector as far as he could, and hurried towards the sounds of distress.

.oOOo.

Crawford Read eventually confessed and told Sherlock Holmes where the kidnappers were holed up. The detective arrived by cab in time to see Lestrade emerge, stumbling, from the cloud of smoke emanating from the former millinery shop. He ran toward the inspector and caught him as he fell.

“Watson…” the inspector rasped, his eyes frantically searching the smoking doorway.

“Lestrade! What do you mean? Where is Watson? You didn’t bring him here, I pray!” the detective exclaimed.

Lestrade coughed, wheezed and gestured at the door “He was right behind me…” he gasped. Holmes leapt to his feet but was seized by Constables Hunter and Wright before he could do anything rash. The firmness of their grip was put to the test as the building howled and the roof collapsed. A great fireball lit up the evening sky.

.oOOo.

Soon after Watson gained the top of the stairs, the overhead timbers shrieked in protest as the roof collapsed. A huge roar went up as new oxygen fed the starving flames. A roofing joist suddenly gave way, slamming into the doctor and pinning him to the floor. Debris continued to fall and strike him where he lay trapped. Watson screamed as flaming, molten pitch drained from the ruined roof and dripped onto his back, burning a trail along his side.

Briefly, in the light of the energised blaze, Watson spotted the little boy, slumped and bound to an upright timber. He wanted to call out to the boy; to reassure him, but he could not. More large sections of the ruined roof came crashing down. Suddenly the joist pinning him shifted, taking enough of its weight away that Watson could gain enough leverage to escape. With single-minded determination, he managed to crawl out from under the wreckage and make his way to the child. Dizziness threatened and he closed his eyes to concentrate.  His hands were numb and were slow to cooperate as he worked his pocketknife on the restraining ropes. He doffed his coat and wrapped the boy in it, then secured his handkerchief around the child’s face. The heat was so intense he felt like he was being steamed alive in his own clothing and feared his eyes would melt should he keep them open too long.

Watson fought the panic which threatened to set in as he realised he did not know how to get out. He knew he had to find the stairs again. Making his best guess, he carried his precious burden and crouching low, worked his way along the wall. More timbers whined in protest as Watson half stumbled, lost his balance and slid down the remaining stairs to the ground floor. The path to the door was now covered with fallen rubble and waste, but the doctor ploughed through it in desperation. Finally the door was before him and he staggered out into the cool evening air.

Strong hands grabbed Watson and removed him from the inferno's vicinity; still others tried to free the boy from his protective embrace. The little hand which gripped his waistcoat so tightly had to be pried loose. He gasped as he was doused with a bucketful of water, and continued to choke for air. Someone was holding him down. He could not open his eyes and when he tried to speak, his attempts only brought on another coughing fit.

Then he heard the most blessed sound in all the entire world: the little boy was crying for his mother. Watson lay back with a sob and cracked open his eyes to look up into the face of Sherlock Holmes, fraught with concern, drawn with anger, and relieved beyond words.

.oOOo.

Later that night, at the Archangel Pub:

Late editions of the Gazette and the Evening Star circulated around the establishment favoured by policemen of the Metropolitan force.

“It’s not often the police receive fair treatment from the press,” said Inspector Lestrade as he rose to head toward the bar.

“Sit down!” Holmes hissed.

“Ow, Holmes! Let go my arm!” Lestrade exclaimed in pain as he was pulled back to his seat.

“Look over there, and tell me what you see,” said the detective, indicating the corner of the bar where Watson and some of the constables were gathered.

The doctor’s clothes bespoke of their earlier adventures; his shirt and waistcoat were singed and blackened in places, and he had failed to remove all the soot from his face. Even so, his eyes shone with merriment and his grin radiated throughout the room. Whatever the constable was saying was obviously humorous for the little group burst into laughter anew.

“He looks… happy,” Lestrade observed.

“He’s drunk,” Holmes replied in disgust, as the publican set another whisky down in front of the doctor, indicating the table where more policemen raised their glasses to him. Watson smiled and raised his glass with appreciation in return.

“And why not? He’s a genuine hero, Holmes. He got me out the door and then went back for the child. He risked his life to save us both.”

“That is the problem. He would risk his life for me; for you; for a stranger; even for a vile blackguard, or some ruddy cat up a tree.”

“I’m sorry. I do not follow. That sounds like the very definition of heroism...”

“Yes, I know. This may be difficult for you to understand, but trust me when I say this: It is not Doctor Watson’s altruism that drives him, but his complete lack of self-worth and total disregard for his own person.  He is not a hero; he is a martyr looking for a cause,” Holmes angrily insisted. “He is a danger to himself, and you would do well to realise it.”

Lestrade shook his head, not wanting to hear these words, and failing to think of a suitable rebuttal. “I do not understand your reasoning, Mister Holmes. John Watson is a sensible man and is responsible for his own choices and actions.”

“So it would seem, and yet, he continues to linger under some misguided notion that he owes a debt to his late army comrades. After all this time, the war still plagues him, and in spite of everything, he feels unworthy for surviving when others did not.”

“Surely not! I know he tends to be a pensive fellow, but you are describing a depressive state. Look at him. I have never seen him in such high spirits.”

“It is a passing phase. He will not be so jovial when the lustre of the evening wears off and the nightmares return. And they will return; they always do.”

Both men looked back toward the doctor. When another constable clapped him soundly about the shoulders in congratulations, Watson winced and paled with the sudden pain. However, an instant later his smile returned, and he disengaged from his comrades to weave his way toward Holmes’ and Lestrade’s table, modestly, yet graciously, receiving more kind words and handshakes along the way.

“Consider my words, Lestrade, the next time you ask him out on a case when I am not around,” Holmes intoned, finally releasing his grip on the inspector’s sleeve.

.oOOo.

 
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Date: 2010-12-13 12:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nebbyjen.livejournal.com
Very good story. Watson is a hero but Holmes's view is understandable.

Date: 2010-12-13 02:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
Thank you for commenting! Watson is truly heroic and this fact must scare the crap out of Holmes!

Date: 2010-12-13 01:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
Holmes definitely has a point -- considering that Watson has at least one burn he hasn't had treated from the dripping pitch!

Oh my...

Date: 2010-12-13 02:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
Holmes does have a point! After all, it won't be Lestrade at Baker Street dealing with recovering!watson over the next few weeks. (Doctors making the worst patients!) Crawling around in broken glass and debris, falling down stairs, burns of varying intensities, cuts, contusions, smoke inhalation... a veritable shopping list of whump! All that and the knowledge that Watson would do the same again in a heartbeat. (Poor Holmes!)
Thank you for commenting!

Date: 2010-12-13 10:31 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I feel almost greedy asking after this great little story, but...it seems only obvious that the next few weeks need to be written? *hopeful face* It'd be quite interesting to see Watson realize (even if only obliquely) what both parties think of him, and how he reacts.

Date: 2010-12-20 03:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
PM me to discuss this idea. Confidentiality assured!

Date: 2010-12-21 06:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] binyothername.livejournal.com
I am distressingly LJ illiterate! PM is like IM? I'd be delighted to discuss ideas (though not sure how much help I will be), just point me to the appropriate channels. :)

Date: 2010-12-13 10:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
...with all the self-medicating Watson was doing that evening, courtesy of the Metropolitan Police force, he wasn't feeling anything!

Date: 2010-12-13 01:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] goldvermilion87.livejournal.com
Interesting story. I think it seems very Holmesian to come up with something like that to explain why Watson would do what he would do (not to mention a rationale for keeping him out of the way of danger.) I don't think Holmes is right, but I could totally see him saying it, and convincing himself of it.

Date: 2010-12-13 02:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
Yes! This is exactly why our muses are drinking buddies! I do not need to explain that although there is some truth to Holmes' theory, it is not the whole truth. Holmes likes to simplify and categorise, but that is hard to do with a complex personality like Watson's. Thanks for commenting!

Date: 2010-12-13 04:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com
Interesting double view of Watson, I think both Lestrade and Holmes are right in their own ways

Date: 2010-12-13 11:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
You are correct to think that both Lestrade and Holmes are right. Of course there are other factors at play as well which neither of them are aware of! Thanks for commenting!

Date: 2010-12-13 06:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] quillwrecker.livejournal.com
Ah, loverly. :D Livid!Holmes is my favorite. Mix him with Heroic!Watson, and you bring out the best in both worlds.

Again, I really love the way you spun this yarn. I'm glad I could be a part of this. :D

Date: 2010-12-13 11:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
I have to thank you again for advertising for art prompts and accepting the verbose challenge I posed. Your eventual results (kidding; well worth the wait!!!) were so overwhelmingly awesome that I had to re-evaluate my earlier premise. I needed to build a better story in order to be worthy of your art. Eventually (not kidding... I was very slow to write this) I changed the plot and fleshed out the details. This is the result. Thank you for your encouragement and advice along the way; especially for the title.

I'm glad you are pleased with the characterisations!
Thanks for collaborating!

Date: 2010-12-14 08:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] quillwrecker.livejournal.com
You're certainly very welcome! Said result is especially pleasing to me, let me assure you: The progression from prompt to drawing to awesome fic fills me with unabridged glee!

Keep writing! And don't worry about taking your time. (Says the expert procrastinator. :D) That's what time's there for, after all.

Date: 2010-12-16 03:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mad-with-july.livejournal.com
This is lovely. Holmes' anger at Watson for being hurt because Watson being hurt frightens him and fear reads as anger and oh, these two, I can't stand it. MEN.

Extremely well done. And the art ... Holmes straining to get inside and the look on his face ... break my heart again, why don't you?

A.

Date: 2010-12-16 10:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com

Thank you for your kind words! 
[info]quillwrecker's art was so well done that I had to let it speak for itself.  It was not important for me to describe what was going on in the picture; it was so fine that it could speak for itself.  Instead, it was my job to frame the picture withing the context of a meaningful story.
Thanks for commenting!

Date: 2010-12-20 08:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dork-nerd.livejournal.com
Oh! Another really moving piece of work. How do you manage to write something so lovely and yet so dark? It was almost philosophical in the end; a debate from Holmes and Lestrade about what defines heroism, depression and delusion. I loved getting a new perspective on the Victorian black moods that plagued our duo without Holmes being the one to struggle within their dark clasp. The way you write Watson is so compelling. He provides an excellent foil (and companion) for Holmes' character. The similarities between the two men and those vital differences that you highlight really show how these characters just work together (on so many different levels)!

Date: 2010-12-21 01:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
Thanks for commenting! In the case of this story, I felt great pressure to write something worthy of [info]quillwrecker's art.

I am gratified that my interpretation of our two heroes is to your liking! Although these ideas are not necessarily original, the armchair psychologist in me suggests that Holmes' moods indicate a borderline bi-polar disorder, while Watson struggles with something akin to clinical depression.

Date: 2010-12-30 06:36 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] hagstrom
This must be one of my favorites fics of yours; I liked the Watson trademark heroism in it, but what really gave it the most original spin was Holmes' theory on the good Doctor's actions. Not blinded by the first impression, but seeing (or trying to see...or rather observing) his friend as he believes he is and his motivations behind those actions.
Is there going to be a continuation? Because the last warning from Holmes seems to indicate just that and I wouldnt complain at all if it was the case!

Date: 2011-01-12 10:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
Wow! Thank you very much! I'm not sure how original my 'spin' is but I really enjoyed writing this story. I give all credit for the inspiration to quillwrecker for the awesome art. I also want to keep my version of Watson from becoming a 'Mary Sue' and to do that means to give him some limitations by suggesting that not all his motive are altruistic.

Holmes knows more about Watson than anyone else, BUT, is this knowledge the same as understanding? Perhaps Lestrade has a better understanding of the good doctor, even with less knowledge. (Blasphemy, I know!)

A continuation has been requested by others as well, but perhaps Holmes' warning to Lestrade was more along the lines of "Get your own Boswell!"

Date: 2011-02-05 05:30 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] methylviolet10b
Eeee! You *did* drop a burning building on Watson! (And quite well, too.) A lovely story to go with equally lovely art.

Date: 2011-02-06 03:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
It is hard to resist placing Watson in imminent danger!
Thank you for your compliment! Most of the credit truly belongs to Quillwrecker!

Date: 2011-07-19 04:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Heart-stopping excitement, and an all-too-perceptive Holmes.

Date: 2011-07-19 09:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
Wow! What lovely a compliment! Thank you so much!

Date: 2011-12-29 10:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nowheregirlme.livejournal.com
Oooh, this was exciting and insightful, too... and a joy to read.

Date: 2011-12-30 08:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
Thank you very much!
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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