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Title:  The Fixed Point
Author: [info]capt_facepalm
Rating:
PG
Fandom: Sherlock Holmes (Gaslight)
Characters: Major John H. Watson, RAMC
Summary: An east wind has come
Warnings: (none, aww)
Word Count: 100
Author's Notes: July 16th prompt: (Visual: either a storm-surged lighthouse, or a purple fop)


Sherlock Holmes had foretold that continental war would be catastrophic. An east wind, he called it, comparing it to the gales that wreak havoc upon our fair shores. I understood his metaphor. The Prussians had been agitating for some time and England would not be spared. Holmes also predicted that the good ship Britannia would weather this maelstrom and, although at great cost, she would be better and stronger for it.

Out here, in the whirling vortices, his prophecy that our land will emerge intact and at peace, has become the one beacon that guides me through the raging storm.

.oOOo.

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Date: 2013-07-16 07:09 pm (UTC)
med_cat: (Default)
From: [personal profile] med_cat
Touching, yet IC and not maudlin :)

Date: 2013-07-19 10:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
Thanks! Character is the most important factor to me.

Date: 2013-07-19 11:19 pm (UTC)
med_cat: (Default)
From: [personal profile] med_cat
I know, and we the readers appreciate the care you take to make sure the characters stay IC :)

Date: 2013-07-19 10:44 pm (UTC)

Date: 2013-07-16 09:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com
Oh, Holmes as a beacon, yes I can see that.

Date: 2013-07-19 10:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
I tried so hard to not have the lighthouse become a metaphor for either one of the characters.
It was the prophecy of eventual peace which Watson uses as his beacon.
(I am fail)

Date: 2013-07-16 09:33 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (Default)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Such strong images:-)

Date: 2013-07-19 10:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
Thank you!
I had to pull out all the nautical and meteorological stops on this one!

Date: 2013-07-20 01:11 am (UTC)
debriswoman: (Default)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Sounds exhausting!

Date: 2013-07-17 01:44 am (UTC)
ancalime8301: viola (viola)
From: [personal profile] ancalime8301
Oh, I like what you did with this! Very nice.

Date: 2013-07-19 10:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
Thank you!
I tried to mix canon with the prompt imagery.

Date: 2013-07-17 04:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
And to Watson, Holmes is the one fixed point in a changing age.

Date: 2013-07-19 10:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
I tried so hard to not have the lighthouse become a metaphor for either one of the characters.
It was the prophecy of eventual peace which Watson uses as his beacon.
(I am fail)

Date: 2013-07-20 03:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Eh. Close enough for a daily prompt.

Date: 2013-07-17 05:29 am (UTC)
methylviolet10b: a variety of different pocketwatches (Default)
From: [personal profile] methylviolet10b
A very nice counterpoint to how Holmes describes Watson in LAST. (And your description of the second picture as 'a purple fop' made me ROTFL!)

Date: 2013-07-19 10:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
Holmes tells Watson that he is a fixed point in LAST just after Watson has misinterpreted Holmes' comment about the east wind. I read it as a slight and that Holmes always thinks Watson will get it wrong (or always takes things literally, or at face-value). I always found that line to be unflattering.

Date: 2013-07-17 09:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trista-zevkia.livejournal.com
Touching and heartfelt. Wow.
Makes me wonder if you could have the same emotional impact in a drabble about the "purple fop". I bet you could:)

Date: 2013-07-19 10:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
Thank you for your kind words, but I fear you have over-estimated my abilities!

Date: 2013-07-19 10:35 pm (UTC)
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